Alors . . . a few
weeks before we left for Paris, I began to dust off my French—or, more aptly,
began to scrape the rust off my French—of 35 years ago by trying my hand at
some translating. Specifically, I
took at look at some French poetry—perhaps not the best idea, as poetry (as
Robert Frost once observed) involves “ulteriority”: a slippery use of language
and imagery that may have led Frost to observe also (so legend has it) that “poetry
is what gets lost in translation.”
Peut-être.
Alors . . . one of
the poems I ended up translating was by an obscure poet, Émile Goudeau,
associated with the famous 19th-century Montmartre café Le Chat Noir. It’s a sonnet, but when I began to
engage with it I decided, for better or for worse, not to be held hostage by
its form: what interested me more than its formal structure was its rhetorical
structure—the movement by which the gypsy woman moves from being an object of
male desire to being an agent of male despair. Here’s the original:
LA CHUTE
La gitane aimée et
perverse
A déserté les Orients
Aux grands cadres
luxuriants,
Pour descendre dans le
commerce.
Dans un cabaret elle
verse
Des liqueurs aux
étudiants ;
Moi, sur mes genoux
suppliants
Le désespoir brutal me
berce.
Or, nous sommes là
quatre ou cinq
Autour de la fille de
zinc,
Dont l’astuce froide
nous joue.
Mais Samson court à
Dalila!
Mon rêve est tombé
dans la boue,
Et je l’ai suivi
jusque-là.
Here’s my attempt to render it (without rending it) in
English:
THE FALL
après Émile Goudeau
Admired and despised, reviled,
desired, she turned
on her gypsy heel
and turned both cheeks
on sumptuous surroundings:
Les Orients. She went
for company far beneath
herself and now
pours booze for students
in a cabaret where
I delude myself in brute despair,
brought to my knees
(with four or five confrères)
by a barmaid bent
on playing her cold tricks.
Did Samson court Delilah?
My dream falls on the muddy floor.
I follow it there and wallow.
Do I have a poetic leg to stand on? Here’s a photo of me standing in Place Émile Goudeau in Montmartre a few days ago: